tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post1374071617348770110..comments2023-10-17T07:37:00.391-05:00Comments on Written Words: Writing Tips: don’t overload your sentencesScott Buryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05061034006121401082noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-29343205854730300012013-10-13T21:36:09.287-05:002013-10-13T21:36:09.287-05:00I shared yoor excellent post with my daughter who ...I shared yoor excellent post with my daughter who is in the midst of writing a review paper for her health science course. I lke the GRIP !BRIANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141094873477472010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-44718188378044271712012-07-17T05:32:22.458-05:002012-07-17T05:32:22.458-05:00Excellent! I could barely read through the example...Excellent! I could barely read through the examples. Too much information. I found this post to be helpful and I will keep it in mind as I write. Thank you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-50989831275160954162012-05-31T01:55:34.210-05:002012-05-31T01:55:34.210-05:00Very precise article with live examples.. loved it...Very precise article with live examples.. loved it, many thanks for sharing !!Aetiyuel Williamshttps://plus.google.com/107572304903811390185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-56285768712820070482012-05-19T21:45:19.760-05:002012-05-19T21:45:19.760-05:00Love the examples. This is something that I have b...Love the examples. This is something that I have been struggling with in my current novel.khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02039448074178382326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-70337130911430431382012-05-08T18:54:34.969-05:002012-05-08T18:54:34.969-05:00I'm glad you appreciated it, Sarah. Nice to se...I'm glad you appreciated it, Sarah. Nice to see your mouse again.Scott Buryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05061034006121401082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-40655234703182947002012-05-08T16:46:31.922-05:002012-05-08T16:46:31.922-05:00Scott, I have to smile at one of those 'fictit...Scott, I have to smile at one of those 'fictitious' examples.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11783724233213197499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-20053205006119132402012-04-22T20:41:41.548-05:002012-04-22T20:41:41.548-05:00As a new writer, I am LOVING these blogs for examp...As a new writer, I am LOVING these blogs for examples and insight. <br />And yea, half those sentences, I was either skipping over them or forgetting the initial point of the sentence all together. <br />Great advice! Looking forward to reading more!Sheyna Plamondonhttp://www.sheynaplamondon.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-59329516268050018752012-03-06T20:02:54.316-05:002012-03-06T20:02:54.316-05:00Yes, it was difficult to get through. I agree wit...Yes, it was difficult to get through. I agree with keeping it clean and simple. Although I enjoy a challenge, it was a bit much.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02605095431591244872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-32956549505963011922012-02-22T13:05:33.810-05:002012-02-22T13:05:33.810-05:00Great infoormation and tips Scott! Thanks for the ...Great infoormation and tips Scott! Thanks for the advice....... This was a great post and I love the picture......Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-76621814042973996142012-02-02T18:54:17.758-05:002012-02-02T18:54:17.758-05:00Nice post, I'm like Elise, I cringed when I re...Nice post, I'm like Elise, I cringed when I read some of the examples. It's a great reminder as I finish up my next Reed Ferguson mystery...Renee Pawlishhttp://tobecomeawriter.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-10437770861024342352012-02-01T10:04:19.569-05:002012-02-01T10:04:19.569-05:00Excellent advice, Scott. Keep it simple, keep it c...Excellent advice, Scott. Keep it simple, keep it clean—if you want your stuff to actually be read. Frankly I couldn't even get through your examples.:)Elise Stokeshttps://www.cassidyjonesadventures.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23776112.post-32280627458774959512012-01-31T20:23:07.373-05:002012-01-31T20:23:07.373-05:00Great advice, as always, Scott! Love that pic!!Great advice, as always, Scott! Love that pic!!Jo VonBargenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14416325772497731357noreply@blogger.com