A Red Army anti-tank squad in World War II Photo source: WWII in color http://www.ww2incolor.com/soviet-union/sovietatsquad.html |
I've settled on a title: Army of Worn Soles. Thanks to my good friend Martin Champoux for suggestions that led me to this.
I've just received the second editing pass by my editor, none other than the renowned Rebecca Tsaros-Dickson. So while this may be a little premature, I think the first chapter is pretty close to being done. So, here it is. Let me know what you think in the Comments.
Chapter 1: Prisoner of War
Kharkiv, October 1941
Maurice sat on the ground, put the bottle beside him and
took off his shirt. Spreading the officer’s
uniform on the smoothest piece of ground he could find, he lay the bottle near
the collar then pushed down and rolled it over the shirt. The lice
cracked under the glass. He rolled the bottle back and forth, feeling a dull
satisfaction at his first pathetic victory in more than half a year.
Crunch, crunch.
The effort was
exhausting. He stopped. His stomach ached and his throat burned with thirst.
He slumped back until he leaned against the barracks. Men
in grey uniforms stood or walked across the cobbled courtyard of the ancient
castle. One came toward him, a slim man with light brown hair and hazel eyes.
He stopped in front of Maurice and leaned down.
“Maurice? Is it you?” he said.
Breathing required effort. So did looking up. Maurice had
not eaten in days, but he still trusted his sight. He knew the man with the
light-brown hair and hazel eyes, even in a Wehrmacht uniform.
“Maurice?" the young man said
again. "What are you doing here?”
He couldn’t
swallow. His mouth held no moisture. “Dying. I’m
starving to death, Bohdan.” Maurice closed his eyes and hung his head.
Bohdan crouched beside him. “You got drafted?”
Maurice made the effort to look up again at his old friend.
“The Red
Army made me a lieutenant. What the hell are you doing here in a German uniform,
Bohdan?”
“The Germans kicked the Russians out,
something we couldn’t do. Why
shouldn’t I join
the winning side? And it's ‘Daniel’ now, not
Bohdan.” He looked around to make sure no one noticed him, a
Wehrmacht officer, talking to a prisoner of war. “I’m glad
you survived, that you were captured instead of killed. The Germans killed a
lot of Red soldiers.”
“I know. I was there.”
Bohdan looked around again to make sure no officers were
watching him talk with a prisoner. "How did you get here?”
“Like you said, we were captured, the
whole army, outside Kharkiv. They brought us here.”
Bohdan shook his head. “Are you all right? I’ll see if I can bring you anything, but I have to be
careful.”
Maurice looked into his friend’s eyes. “Get me
out of here.”
“Set a prisoner free? Are you crazy?”
“Bohdan—sorry, Daniel, you’re my best friend. Or you were. If I ever meant anything to
you, get me out.”
Daniel—Bohdan, looked left and right again. “I cannot let Red soldiers go,” he
whispered.
Maurice took a dry breath. His strength was almost gone. “Daniel, you’re an officer in a victorious army. You have the power. You
can get me out, me and my boys. You have the power to get us out of here.”
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Daniel shook his head and stood. “Stalin's going to surrender within six months, and then all
the prisoners will be freed. Hitler has promised freedom for all nations. We’ll all be free. Ukraine will be free.”
Maurice looked at the ground between his splayed legs. He
could no longer lift his head. “I can’t wait six months. I can’t wait two days. If you wait, you’ll find a corpse. We’ll all be dead. You have to get us
out now.”
Daniel, the Ukrainian man in a German uniform, hesitated.
He looked around the camp again, but no one paid attention. “So the Reds made you an officer, did
they? Where are your men? All dead?”
Somewhere, Maurice found the strength to stand up again. He
staggered to the barracks door, went in and called his odalenye, the
unit he commanded. “Step over
here, boys.”
Daniel followed Maurice inside, and Maurice wondered if he
wasn’t
breaking some regulation by entering prisoners’ quarters unaccompanied by at least
one guard. Maurice scanned the room, taking in the injured, starving and
defeated men. He realized when they saw Daniel, they saw their captor.
Daniel stepped out of the barracks and waited for his
friend outside the door. “I’ll see what I can do, Maurice. But
you’re on the
wrong fucking side.” He left.
Maurice picked up the bottle on the ground beside him and
returned to crushing the lice out of his uniform shirt. It was the only thing
he could do to reduce his misery.
He thought about the last time he had seen Bohdan, before
he was Daniel. It was in the gymnasium, the pre-university school in Peremyshl.
What used to be Poland.
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This reads very well and will make for an interesting read. I hope you do well with it, Scott.
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